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7. 직원의 job skills를 향상시키는 것은 중요하다. 그러나, 그들이 그만 두게 (quit) 되면 그 투자는 수포로 돌아간다. (go up in smoke) (복문을 쓸 것)  _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 8. a professional tutor는 당신의 친구보다 덜 flexible하다. 그래서, 당신은 schoolwork 이외의 다른 것들 (things other than schoolwork)에 거의 신경을 쓸 수 가 없다. (복문을 쓸 것) 1

2 9. 비행기가 없다면, 사람들은 다른 나라로 여행하기 위해 많은 시간을 써야만 할 텐데. (현재 사실의 가정  가정법 과거)
 _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 10. 그의 조언이 없었더라면, 어제 밤 나는 많은 시간을 허비했을 텐데. 2

3 “독립형 서론/결론에서 본론소개/본론요약의 용도”로 사용할 것
outweigh 와 : 의 활용법 “독립형 서론/결론에서 본론소개/본론요약의 용도”로 사용할 것 예) 동의/반대? “큰 회사 > 작은 회사” (서론) 큰 회사 이점들 outweigh 작은 회사 이점들 for two reasons: higher salaries and better welfare benefits. 3

4 1. 화자에 따르면, 물고기 양식 (fish farming)의 장점들은 그 문제점들을 능가한다.
According to the speaker, the advantages of fish farming outweigh the problems. 2. 온라인 교육을 받는 것의 장점들이 전통적인 학교에서 공부하는 것의 장점들을 능가한다.  _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 3. (콜론을 사용할 것) 국내 여행을 하는 것이 2가지 이유로 더 낫다 (비용, 안전)  _____________________________________________________ 4

5 5. 공공장소에서 흡연을 금지하는 것의 장점들은 그것의 문제점들을 넘어선다.
4. (콜론을 사용할 것) 정부는 복지와 관련된 새로운 정책을 발표했다, jobless people의 세금이 깎일 것이다. The government announced a new policy related to welfare; jobless people’s tax will be cut. 5. 공공장소에서 흡연을 금지하는 것의 장점들은 그것의 문제점들을 넘어선다. The advantages of banning smoking in the public place outweight those of problems. 6. (콜론을 사용할 것) 한 번에 (at a time) 한 가지 일을 하는 것이 2가지 측면에서 더 낫다 (perfection through increased concentration, enjoyment from work) Doing one thing at a time is better in two aspects: perfection through increased concentration, enjoyment from work (맞음) 7. The importance of instilling children in confidence outweighs developing the academic ability. 8. The medical benefits of x-rays outweigh the risks. (맞음) 9. Smartphones affect people’s lives in two aspects: education and entertainment. (맞음) 10. Academic importance outweighs children’s financial development. 5

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7. 아이들에게 자신감을 심어주는 (instill A in B) 것의 중요성이 학문적 능력을 길러주는 (develop) 것의 중요성 보다 크다.  _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 8. x-rays의 의학적 혜택들은 그것의 위험 (risk)을 넘어선다. 9. (콜론을 사용할 것) 스마트 폰은 사람들의 삶의 2가지 측면 (aspects) 에 영향을 미친다. (education, entertainment) 10. 학문적 중요성이 어린 아이들의 financial responsibility의 발전보다 크다. 6

7 Do you agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) 이용 가능한 template 스트레스 해소 명성 자연 환경 보호 인터넷 이용한 정보 찾기의 용이함 창의력 경험 얻기 7 7

8 Do you agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) 순정 버전 1. (스트레스 해소) When it comes to relieving stress, 선택한 쪽 is expected to be (more) effective. Since society is becoming increasingly complicated, the number of ____ (사람, 학교, 나라, 정부 등) that are suffering from stress is on the rise, but the problem is that it is not easy to find a proper way of dealing with the issue. On this occasion, 선택한 쪽 can come in very handy. According to a well-known Korean sociologist/ scientist/ educationalist, when (사람, 학교, 나라, 정부 등) choose (또는 rely on) 선택한 쪽, they can accomplish the goal of reducing pressure from work or studies in an effective manner. The sociologist/ scientist/ educationalist also suggests that it will generally take a long time to achieve this beneficial effect if (사람, 학교, 나라, 정부 등) opt for (또는 depend on) 반대 쪽. 8 8

9 Do you agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) 튜닝 버전 1. (스트레스 해소) When it comes to relieving stress, 선택한 쪽 is expected to be (more) effective. Since society is becoming increasingly complicated, the number of ____ (사람, 학교, 나라, 정부 등) that are suffering from stress is on the rise, but the problem is that it is not easy to find a proper way of dealing with the issue. On this occasion, 선택한 쪽 can come in very handy. For example, 나의 친구의 삼촌은 TV를 통해 스트레스를 풀려고 하는 경향이 있다. Unfortunately, 그가 일과 후 늦게 집에 돌아와 TV를 켜면 재미있는 프로그램이 거의 없어 효과적으로 스트레스를 덜 수가 없었다. In contrast, 나의 aunt는 스트레스를 없애기 위해 스마트 폰을 자주 이용한다. 그녀는 게임을 즐기는 편이고 and as a result 그녀의 스트레스는 다 사라졌다고 말했다. According to a well-known Korean sociologist, when (사람, 학교, 나라, 정부 등) choose (또는 rely on) 선택한 쪽, they can accomplish the goal of reducing pressure from work or studies in an effective manner. The sociologist also suggests that it will generally take a long time to achieve this beneficial effect if (사람, 학교, 나라, 정부 등) opt for 반대 쪽. 9 9

10 Do you agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) 순정 버전 4. (인터넷 이용한 정보 찾기의 용이함) Due to the development of the Internet, people should admit that 선택한 쪽 is (more) meaningful (또는 possible). Before technology was developed, particularly the Internet, many people had difficulty finding information they needed. However, as technology is becoming more and more advanced, people can now find information online easily and quickly. Pulitzer Prize-winning American author Dave Barry said, “The Internet is the most important single development in the history of human communication.” Surveys have shown that when asked to choose between using online resources and relying on 반대 쪽, the majority of people responded that online resources should have priority (또는 are more advantageous). Conversely, the percentage of people who supported the latter was extremely small. The results of the surveys indicate the growing realization that 선택한 쪽 is more advantageous throughout life. 10 10

11 Do you agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) 튜닝 버전 4. (인터넷 이용한 정보 찾기의 용이함) Due to the development of technology, people should admit that 스마트 폰 상에서 정보를 찾는 것 is possible. Before technology was developed, particularly the Internet, many people had difficulty finding information they needed. However, as technology is becoming more and more advanced, people can now find information online easily and quickly. Pulitzer Prize-winning American author Dave Barry said, “The Internet is the most important single development in the history of human communication.” 나의 cousin의 경우, 정보를 찾고자 할 때 늘 스마트 폰을 이용한다. 요즘 스마트 폰은 너무나 발전해서 그녀는 굉장히 빨리 원하는 정보를 찾을 수 가 있고 그녀는 그것에 만족하고 있다. 만약 그가 TV를 통해 이러한 정보를 찾으려고 했다면 원하는 정보를 그렇게 쉽게 찾지 못했을 것이다. Surveys have shown that when asked to choose between using online resources and relying on 반대 쪽, the majority of people responded that online resources should have priority. Conversely, the percentage of people who supported the latter was extremely small. The results of the surveys indicate the growing realization that 선택한 쪽 is more advantageous throughout life. 11 11

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Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) template: 스트레스해소, 명성, 자연환경보호, 인터넷정보찾기의용이함, 창의력, 경험 얻기 ____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 12 12

13 p. 20의 서론, 본론 1 (자연환경 보호) + 본론 2 (인터넷 정보 찾기) + 결론
Do you agree or disagree? “Telephone has had a greater effect on people’s lives than television has.” (2010/08/21 – 한국) template: 스트레스해소, 명성, 자연환경보호, 인터넷정보찾기의용이함, 창의력, 경험 얻기 할 일 p. 19의 본론 2 (4번 공식) 작성 + 결론 작성 p. 20의 서론, 본론 1 (자연환경 보호) + 본론 2 (인터넷 정보 찾기) + 결론 수업 ppt 올리는 곳 (eng.dangi.co.kr  커뮤니티  민상홍  학습자료) 자료 비번: 3924kwj 13 13

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For example, 나의 친구의 삼촌은 TV를 통해 스트레스를 풀려고 하는 경향이 있다. Unfortunately, 그가 일과 후 늦게 집에 돌아와 TV를 켜면 재미있는 프로그램이 거의 없어 효과적으로 스트레스를 덜 수가 없었다. In contrast, 나의 aunt는 스트레스를 없애기 위해 스마트 폰을 자주 이용한다. 그녀는 게임을 즐기는 편이고 and as a result 그녀의 스트레스는 다 사라졌다고 말했다. For example, my friend’s uncle tends to relieve stress through TV. Unfortunately, when he arrived home late after work, turning on TV, he couldn’t relieve stress because of few interesting programs. In contrast, my aunt often uses smartphone to relieve her stress. She tends to enjoy games and as a result she says that her stress has all gone. ____________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 14 14

15 동의/반대? “Twenty years from now, students will no longer use printed books.” (2007/08/04 미국)
이용 가능한 template 스트레스 해소 명성 향상 자연 환경 보호 인터넷 이용한 정보 찾기의 용이함 창의력 경험 얻기

16 동의/반대? “Twenty years from now, students will no longer use printed books.” (2007/08/04 미국)
순정 버전 3. (자연 환경 보호) When it comes to helping the environment, 선택한 쪽 will turn out to be more efficient. In the complex world, an increasing number of _____ (사람, 학교, 기관, 회사, 나라, 사회 or 정부  문제에 맞게 넣을 것) are burdened with environmental pollution. English physicist Stephen Hawking is worried that we are in danger of destroying ourselves by our greed and stupidity toward nature. Unfortunately, an all-encompassing solution to the issue seems distant. In this case, 선택한 쪽 can be very useful. According to a well-known Korean sociologist/ scientist/ educationalist, when _____ (사람, 학교, 기관, 회사, 나라, 사회 or 정부  문제에 맞게 넣을 것) choose (또는 rely on) 선택한 쪽, they (또는 it) can accomplish the goal of preserving nature in an effective manner. The sociologist/ scientist/ educationalist also suggests that it will generally take a long time to achieve this beneficial effect if _____ (사람, 학교, 기관, 회사, 나라, 사회 or 정부  문제에 맞게 넣을 것) opt for (또는 depend on) 반대 쪽.

17 동의/반대? “Twenty years from now, students will no longer use printed books.” (2007/08/04 미국)
순정 버전 4. (인터넷 이용한 정보 찾기의 용이함) Due to the development of the Internet, people should admit that 선택한 쪽 is (more) meaningful (또는 possible). Before technology was developed, particularly the Internet, many people had difficulty finding information they needed. However, as technology is becoming more and more advanced, people can now find information online easily and quickly. Pulitzer Prize-winning American author Dave Barry said, “The Internet is the most important single development in the history of human communication.” Surveys have shown that when asked to choose between using online resources and relying on 반대 쪽, the majority of people responded that online resources should have priority (또는 are more advantageous). Conversely, the percentage of people who supported the latter was extremely small. The results of the surveys indicate the growing realization that 선택한 쪽 is more advantageous throughout life. 17 17