Help your book choice Kim Seoyul Kim Jinho Kim Doyoung Go Sungmin.

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1 Help your book choice Kim Seoyul Kim Jinho Kim Doyoung Go Sungmin

2 Spaghetti Chicken

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4 When you are hungry and want to eat noodles, undoubtedly you should like spaghetti I Love Spaghetti~! When you are hungry and want to eat noodles, I recommend spaghetti to you.

5 I recommend spaghetti! Because spaghetti makes me healthy. And its recipe is too popular to find any website, so you can cook without help. I recommend spaghetti. It makes me healthy. And Its recipe is so popular that you can find it easily. So, you can make spaghetti by yourself.

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8 In the world, various kind of chicken dishes exist. Chicken dishes are loved by all over the world. I Love Chicken~! In the world, various kinds of chicken dishes exist. Also, they are loved by all over the world.

9 Typically, chicken dishes have two main basic types, fried chicken and spicy sauce chicken. Chicken dishes are made up of many kinds of ingredients.

10 There are lots of chicken dishes and various kinds of chicken dishes are existent all over the world. There are lots of chicken dishes. And various kinds of chicken dishes exist all over the world.

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12 Chicken dishes are loved by all over the world because they are tasty. 뒷받침되는 이유가 너무나 빈약합니다. 감각적인 묘사를 포함한 더욱 풍부한 내용이 필요합니다. It is easy to eat. You can just prepare a round dish and fork and end! 스파게티라는 음식을 추천하는 근거로 쓰기에는 합리적인 이유가 될 수 없다. 스파게티를 대표하는 특성이 될 수 없다.

13 What I want to talk is that I love chicken and we love chicken 글에서 말하고자 하는 점이란 ‘ 주제 ’ 와 일치하는 것인데, What I want to talk 뒤에 주제가 나오지 않아서 부자연스럽다. There isn’t Concluding Sentence! 결말이 없는 글입니다. 형식상으로는 첫 문단과 마지막 문단이 각각 주제와 결말에 해당하는 것 같지만 해석해보면 결국 두 문단 모두 같은 내용이라는 것을 알 수 있습니다.

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